scrimpy
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Post by scrimpy on Jan 27, 2008 19:58:56 GMT -5
Comments: Well, I did this all in one night when on a sugar high. o____o So not my best work but I rather like it for a beginning introduction into the beginning trilogy of Lucitine, and the start of three different trilogies relating to this place. :] So like 9 books in total, and 3 different trilogies.
More will be explained in the next chapter about the very last comment she made.
And if anyone asks why they have a moon for light rather than a sun is because they are so far out from our sun (being the 12th planet) and the fact that most of the life exist on the super continent of Lucitine. So you can picture it like a clear full moon only a tinsy bit brighter. So no comments please on how light works. This is phantasy after all. ^^
Well, this is a graphic novel that I will eventually turn into a comic this summer. Well I started working on the novel version Friday night and finally got around to posting it. SO I'm looking for critiques and etc....[/font]
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Zanefera
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Post by Zanefera on Jan 27, 2008 20:18:45 GMT -5
I like it. I'm currently writing a book, but it's not the same kind, or as good as yours!
I especially like Zurie's(?) personality. Even though, in the first chapter of any book, we only get the basics of the main character's personality. _huggles the chapter- I shall be your number one fan when it's published!
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scrimpy
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Post by scrimpy on Jan 27, 2008 20:29:07 GMT -5
I bet it is too good! You're a good writer! -prodesZannie'sposts-
And thankies ^^ , though I'm sure I'd never get this published. >.> I just need to like vent the story out because its blocking my muse levels. ;_; But if for some reason I would ever publish this, I'll put you under dedications as biggest fan. xD
<B>EDIT:</b> Wow, that was a lot of spelling errors in one post. o____o
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